雅思考官眼中的幸福是什么？
剖析2篇雅思考官范文
“什么是幸福？”
题目：You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic:
Happiness is considered important to people, but most people have different definitions of happiness.What do you think are the main factors in achieving happiness?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.
MODEL ANSWER（考官范文）
In this essay, I shall outline what I believe are the main factors in achieving happiness. I do not claim that the list I present is exhaustive and I do not place the factors in any particular order. （开门见山导入题目，引出下文。）
One of the key factors in achieving happiness is a healthy attitude to life.（段落分论点，幸福要素之一。）A “healthy attitude” is a rather ethereal concept. To me, it means being positive in one’s outlook, but not to the extent whereby one thinks that everything will automatically work out well without any effort. It means making an effort to do what is right not just for yourself but for others too.（分论点后面是的内容都是证明本段分论点，自圆其说，说服读者。）
I think that another important factor is having a core group of people that you can trust, work with, socialize with and share interests with.（段落分论点，幸福要素之二）In the past this group of people would most likely be family, but times have changed and nowadays this group could include colleagues, classmates and/or fellow members of a club or hobby group. Having such a group of people provides a person with support when they meet problems and with people simply to enjoy life with.（分论点后面是的内容都是证明本段分论点，自圆其说，说服读者。）
A third factor is good health.（段落分论点，幸福要素之三）It is possible to achieve happiness without being fully healthy, but having health problems tends to make people less enthusiastic and positive about life. Think of the last time you had a cold – a minor illness. You probably didn’t really feel like socializing much and/ or your work probably wasn’t up to its usual standard. In addition to warding off illness, I think that an important factor in achieving happiness is keeping fit. Scientists have shown that exercising actually makes us feel happier. （分论点后面是的内容都是证明本段分论点，自圆其说，说服读者。）
In conclusion, I think that achieving happiness depends on many different factors, but these are the main three as far as I am concerned. (299 words) （总结，概括全文）
C4 T2 MODEL ANSWER BY AN EXAMINER
WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic:
Happiness is considered very important in life.
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.
MODEL ANSWER（考官范文）
Happiness is very difficult to define, because it means so many different things to different people. (开门见山直接回答Q1 Why is it difficult to define?) While some people link happiness to wealth and material success, others think it lies in emotions and loving personal relationships. Yet others think that spiritual paths, rather than either the material world or relationships with people, are the only way to true happiness.（some people think…, others think…Yet others think…用三类人对幸福不同的定义来充分解释段落中心句）
Because people interpret happiness for themselves in so many different ways, it is difficult to give any definition that is true for everyone. (承上启下) However, if there are different kinds of happiness for different individuals then the first step in achieving it would be to have a degree of self-knowledge. (回答Q2幸福要素之一) A person needs to know who he or she is before being able to know what it is that makes him orher happy. (解释)
Of course, factors such as loving relationships, good health, the skills to earn a living and a peaceful environment all contribute to our happiness too. But this does not mean that people without these conditions can not be happy. (回答Q2列举幸福其它要素)
Overall, I think an ability to keep clear perspectives in life is a more essential factor in achieving happiness. (回答Q2作者认为比较重要的幸福要素) By that I mean an ability to have a clear sense of what is important in our lives (the welfare of our families, the quality of our relationships, making other people happy, etc.) and what is not (a problem at work, getting annoyed about trivial things, etc.).（解释）
Like self-awareness, this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these are the two factors that may be the most important for achieving happiness. (262 words 11 sentences 5 paragraphs ) (概括总结全文)
备注：这篇考官范文有两个问题，一定要注意审题,全部充分作答～
幸福这个话题是比较抽象的～看了这两篇考官范文之后，小伙伴们应该知道该如何来回答了吧^_^
今天就讲到这里～如有需要可以到正领培训来找我噢～我们下次再见～
