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2019-11-10 正领国际教育

雅思大作文一共三种类型,在“do you agree or disagree”类型的文章中,普遍不建议学生中立,要求学生必须选一方立场。

虽然雅思写作大纲中并没有要求学生一定要中立,但是都问你“是否同意了”,如果回答是中立的,除非文笔特别出彩,否则都会被视为没有回答这个问题。

那么中立类型的文章,我们推荐使用让步段作为文章主干段之一,既能引出反方观点,也能坚定我方立场。

让步段

让步段是指在写作先承认对方观点,在进行反击,最后再次证明了我方立场。

让步段的结构

步骤一:It it undeniable that +对方观点

步骤二:however进行反驳+我方观点

步骤三:therefore+结论

写法一:先承认对方有优势,再承认我方优点更多。

问题:

Many people think looking after families in cities is better than in countryside,do you agree or disagree?

范文:

It is undeniable that countryside has more fresh air, which is good to their health. Low density of population and vehicles create a cleaner environment. In recent studies, in rural area, the rate of lung cancer is comparatively lower than urban area. 

However, the infrastructure of cities is developed.More advanced medicine care, abundant education resources and various transplantation bring enormous convenience to our life in major cities. For instance, a better therapy can be acquired by families suffering serious disease.Therefore,living in downtown is a better choice.

写法二:先承认我方的不足,再给出解决方案。

问题:

Some people think it is better to study foreign language in primary school rather than middle school.Do you agree or disagree?

范文:

It is undeniable that the sacrifice of time is inevitable for mastering a foreign language .The complexity and difficulty of language acquisition may be beyond their understanding ,which leads to massive consumption of time and energy.However, childhood is the best stage to develop the language talent. 

Without any disturbance like academic stress, learning a foreign language is not only an interest,but also a tool to stimulate their up-growth of brain. In recent studies, the age from 3 to 12 is the most suitable time to start studying l language. Therefore, primary school time is a better choice .

写法三:先承认对方立场成立,再指出对方立场的漏洞。

问题:

Many people think looking after families in cities is better than in countryside,do you agree or disagree?

范文:

It is undeniable that countryside has more fresh air, which is good to their health. Low density of population and vehicles create a cleaner environment. In recent studies, in rural area, the rate of lung cancer is comparatively lower than urban area. 

However,the undeveloped education and medicine in rural area cannot be ignored. The development scale of villages or town restrict the introduction of talents or elite in these areas,which leads to the excessive concentration of advanced resources. Therefore, countryside is not as suitable as cities for looking after our families.

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