嗨同学们,我是王老师,今天给大家讲讲雅思写作技巧。
说到雅思写作,最难的问题就是突破6分瓶颈冲到7分,那么对学生的写作句式到观点逻辑思维要求都非常高。
那么跨越6分与7分的之间的鸿沟有什么技巧呢?今天讲的技巧之一:名词化。
那么——
什么是名词化呢?
名词化(Nominalization)是指在写作中尽量使用名词充当各类成分。其主要作用是通过去除不必要的人称和从句,使得表达更加精简。
例如:我很开心 。
翻译为:I am happy all the time.
其实真正想表达的是happy这种情绪,但是如果把I 放在主语位置,实际上很难抓住考官的眼球,考官很难快速挑选出关键词。
所以把happy 修改为happiness,放在主语位置,就可以改为:Happiness persists on me.
名词化的难点是什么?
名词化真正难的是扭转思维方式。在写句子时要删掉不必要的信息或者不要让重点信息被掩盖。
例如:我们骑车的时候可以避免高峰期拥堵,还不需要找停车场。
we can avoid traffic jam and need not to find special parking lot for a bike in peak time.(原句)
“we”放在前面,根本看不到后面的交通拥挤,所以建议修改为:
Traffic congestion ,which consumes much of commuting time, can be avoided by cycling without the demand of a parking lot.(名词化后)
思维上的转换,是名词化的重难点。7分以上的作文几乎看不到任何的people, some people,others 等,整个文章的质感和学术性议论文很接近。
名词化的用法有哪些?
鉴于名词化比较难以使用,所以给需要突破瓶颈的同学分享一下以下6点技巧。
1、动词变名词
原句:He failed.This became the turning point of his life.This made him lost his fortune and fame.
fail为动词,变为failure,就可以修改为:
His failure ,which was the turning point of his life, made him lost his fortune and fame.
2、形容词名词化
例如:我们通过旅游发现了自然之美。
We can appreciate the beautiful nature .(原句)
The appreciation to beauty of nature can be accomplished through tourism .(名词化后)
3、用时间、地点名词做主语
例如:在2003年,小村庄遭遇了特大的飓风。(Hurricane)
The village was attacked by the hurricane.
2003 witnessed the hurricane attacked the small village.
2003 witnessed the attack of hurricane to this small village.
4、被动语态
例如:人们总是忽略全球化的缺点。
People always ignore the drawbacks of globalization.(原句)
The drawbacks of globalization are always ignored.(名词化后)
5、用抽象名词做主语
例如:我害怕蜘蛛。
I am afraid of spiders.(原句)
My fear is stimulated by spiders,the sensible perception of climate change is difficult.(名词化后)
6、用with ,without 等介词+名词
例如:由于没有妥善治理好污水,湖泊已经污染很严重了。
If we do not have enough time ,we cannot finish this task.
Without enough time, this task cannot be finished.(原句)
Without the punctual purification of waste water,the lake has suffered serious pollution.(名词化后)
以上就是雅思写作的技巧了,同学们记得记在笔记里,以准备不时之需。