烤鸭们来看一看,雅思9.0的写作到底好在哪里?
2020-08-8 正领国际教育

英国文化协会,

也就是雅思考试的管理者,

会在4个方面的分数取平均值,

确定一篇论文的总分:

任务成就

应试者在多大程度上以充分发展的位置处理任务的所有部分,包括充分扩展和得到良好支持的想法?

连贯和凝聚力

考生是否在逻辑上组织了信息和想法?整个论文是否具有凝聚力?

词汇资源

应试者在多大程度上准确地使用了大量词汇?他们是否表现出对词汇项使用的先进性?

语法范围和准确性

应试者是否准确使用了一系列语法结构?

接下来是一篇9级示例文章,

烤鸭们一起看看它到底哪里写的好?

考试问题

Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

写作示例

Parents throughout the world place spend time reading with their offspring to prepare them for school where their literacy skills are further developed; however, recent research suggests that focusing on reading at an early age can be detrimental, and participating in fun activities would be far more beneficial. I am a strong advocate of this approach, and the benefits of it will be covered in this essay. 

A fundamental reason for this is that there is no biological age for reading, and pushing infants to acquire this skill before they are ready could have repercussions. For example, in the UK, many boys are reluctant readers, possibly because of being forced to read, and this turned them off reading. By focusing on other activities and developing other skills such as creativity and imagination, when they are ready to read, they usually acquire this skill rapidly. In addition, the importance of encouraging creativity and developing a child’s imagination must be acknowledged. Through play, youngsters develop social and cognitive skills, for example, they are more likely to learn vocabulary through context rather than learning it from a book.

Furthermore, play allows youngsters to mature emotionally, and gain self-confidence. There is no scientific research which suggests reading at a young age is essential for a child’s development, moreover, evidence suggests the reverse is true. In Finland, early years’ education focuses on playing. Reading is only encouraged if a child shows and interest in developing this skill. This self-directed approach certainly does not result in Finnish school leavers falling behind their foreign counterparts. In fact, Finland was ranked the sixth best in the world in terms of reading.

Despite being a supporter of this non-reading approach, I strongly recommend incorporating bedtime stories into a child’s daily routine. However, reading as a regular daytime activity should be swapped for something which allows the child to develop other skills.

为什么这篇论文能到得到9分的高分?

下篇一起深入解析这4个评分标准

任务成就 Task-achievement

连贯与衔接 Coherence and Cohesion

词汇资源 Lexical Resource

语法范围和准确性 Grammatical Range and Accuracy

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